Jess’s story - a rewrite
Posted: Thu Jun 20, 2024 7:38 am
Thanks to Nates_sneaks for the original version of this story. With his blessing I share my rewritten version. It contains different sneakers (more my style) and a different plot over the coming chapters.
Enjoy!
Chapter 1 - In Her Shoes
Jess was 21 years old and a junior in college. She sat at her dorm room desk, staring at her computer with a look of frustration on her face. She was short, standing at only 5'2", but she made up for it with her bold personality. Her brown hair was tied back in a messy bun, and she wore a crop top and a pair of short Nike running shorts, showing off her toned figure.
Procrastination and her love for late-night parties had caused Jess to neglect her studies, resulting in a failing grade in her statistics class. And her professor, Mr. Jeff Smith, wasn't making it any easier. He was a hunk, with sharp features and a muscular build. Jess couldn't help but glance at him every chance she got, which probably didn't help her situation in class. But she couldn't deny the way he looked at her too, with a hint of desire in his eyes. As Jess checked her grades, she noticed that her grade in stats had dropped drastically. Desperate to fix it, she shut her laptop and grabbed her bag. She stopped at the door to slip on her all-white ON cloudmonsters, her favorite pair of shoes. She loved how comfortable they were, and since she always tried to keep them in good shape, these ones were pristine. The material was just as white as it always was, only the insides were darkened from her feet sweating in them all day. Not caring about her lazy outfit, Jess made sure to show off enough cleavage to improve her odds and left out the door.
She took a deep breath and knocked on Mr. Smith's office door. As soon as he opened the door, Jess felt her heart race. He stood there in his fitted button-up shirt and slacks, looking as handsome as ever. His dark hair was styled perfectly, and his glasses rested on the bridge of his nose. Jess couldn't deny her attraction to him, even though she knew it was inappropriate. "Mr. Smith, can I talk to you about my grade in your class?" she asked, trying to sound confident. "Of course, come in," he replied, stepping aside for her to enter. Jess took a seat in front of his desk, crossing her legs and adjusting her top to show off even more of her cleavage.
She could see Mr. Smith's eyes dart from her breasts down to her sneakers, but he quickly got straight to business, and explained to Jess that there was no extra credit to be offered, and it’d be unfair to give her special treatment. “Please Mr. Smith, I’ll do anything” Jess says, almost pleading. “Well Jess, there’s only one thing I can think of that would make up all your missing work.”
“Please just tell me what it is and I’ll do it!”
Mr. Smith's smirk turned into a full-fledged smile, his eyes lit up with deviance, but also excitement. He leaned back in his chair, his gaze dropping to Jess's feet. "Good. Now I want you to do as I say, raise your feet up onto my desk," he commanded, gesturing to the Cloudmonsters on her feet. Jess hesitated for a moment, feeling a bit nervous but also strangely aroused. She knew she shouldn't be agreeing to whatever this is, but she was desperate to pass this class. Slowly, she raised her feet up onto Mr. Smith's desk, crossing her ankles and leaning back in the chair. She could feel his eyes on her, taking in the sight of her warm and slightly sweaty ONs. "You see, Jess, I have a sneaker fetish. And your little Cloudmonsters are just perfect for it," Mr. Smith explained, his voice husky with desire. Jess couldn't believe what she was hearing. Her professor had a fetish for her sneakers? It was both shocking and strangely exciting. Mr. Smith leaned forward, his hand reaching out to caress the toe of her perfect little white ONs. Jess could feel herself getting more and more turned on by his touch. "Now, let me explain exactly what I want to do with your Sneakers," he said, his hand still caressing the toe of her sparkling clean shoes, even slipping a finger past the laces to feel inside her warm, sweaty ONs. Jess could feel her heart race with excitement as Mr. Smith painted a vivid picture of his desires. He wanted to smell her sneakers, inhaling the scent of her feet after a long day of walking around campus. He wanted to fuck her sneakers, thrusting his hard dick inside her warm, sweaty ONs. But most of all, he wanted to cum inside her sneakers, filling them with his load and making her wear them that way. Jess couldn't believe what she was hearing, but she couldn't deny that it was turning her on. She could feel herself getting wet at the thought of fulfilling his sneaker fetish and getting rewarded with a good grade. "And you'll do all of this for me, won't you Jess?" Mr. Smith asked, his voice low and full of desire. "Yes, I'll do it," Jess said, feeling a sense of adrenaline and excitement at the same time. Jess could see the bulge in his pants getting even bigger. She couldn't believe what she was about to do, but she couldn't back down now.
"Good, and it also will start NOW. From this moment on Jess, you must wear your Cloudmonsters to class every day, and without any socks, or else you will be punished. And after each class, you'll stay behind and watch me fuck them hard until I cum inside them and you’ll wear them that way, absolutely no cleaning them unless I say" Mr. Smith explained, his voice full of anticipation. Jess could feel herself getting wet at the thought of fulfilling his deep desire for her shoes, even as a sense of sadness crept over her as she realized her beautiful white sneakers will never be the same again.
"Do we have a deal?" Mr. Smith asked again, still caressing her ONs with his hand. Jess looked into his eyes, feeling a mixture of fear and arousal. She nodded, "We have a deal," Jess said, her voice shaky with nerves.
"Good girl," Mr. Smith said, his eyes filled with desire. "Now, if you don't mind…," he said with a wink, slipping her Cloudmonsters off her feet, one at a time. He could already smell the strong, sweaty scent of Jess's feet, mixed with the scent of her ONs. He couldn't help but take a deep breath in, taking in the strong aroma. "These sneakers of yours smell so perfect, Jess. I love it," Mr. Smith said, taking a moment to bury his face in them again. He then peeled her socks off her feet, revealing her pretty arches and toes. He placed them in his drawer, knowing she wouldn't need them anymore.
"Now, Jess, I'll be nice enough to give you a choice. You can either watch as I fuck and cum in your hot little sneakers, or you can wait in the hall till I’m done giving them everything they deserve and more," Mr. Smith said, giving her the option. Jess couldn't believe she had gotten to this point of no return already , but she was also too turned on to back down now. She told Mr. Smith that she would love to stay and watch. "Excellent. And I could use some encouragement from you, Jess. It's the least you could do for me," Mr. Smith said, unbuttoning his pants and revealing his large, aroused cock. He placed Jess's right sneaker on the edge of the desk and slowly slid his member into it, keeping eye contact with Jess the entire time. Her little size six sneaker was barely big enough to fit his entire shaft, but Mr. Smith made it work. He brought the other sneaker up to his nose, taking in the intoxicating scent, and began thrusting his rod into her perfectly white Cloudmonster. Jess obliged his request and began talking to him, telling him how much she loved seeing him punish her poor, little sneakers. She took her left shoe out of his hand and held it up for him to smell, allowing him to focus all of his attention on fucking her right sneaker even harder. "Yes, professor, smell my little white sneakers! I've worn them to work as a waitress, to school, even to the gym! But I’ve kept them perfectly clean just for you to fuck. Oh, I can't wait to wear your cum around in them, FILL THEM, FILL THEM WITH ALL YOUR CUM" Jess said, her voice filled with desire, even surprising herself. Her words pushed Mr. Smith over the edge, and he began moaning and thrusting harder and deeper into her sneaker. Jess watched in amazement as he pulled out mid-orgasm, shooting his warm cum inside her sneaker. The ropes slapping her insoles, pooling into the worn down pad of her insole and quickly flowing to the toes. He quickly switched to the other sneaker, filling up the heel with the last few spurts of his cum. "Oh my gosh!" Jess exclaimed, shocked at how much cum he was able to fill up in her pretty white ONs. She couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction and arousal at the thought of wearing them with her professor’s cum in them.
Mr. Smith sat back in his chair, catching his breath and admiring the sight in front of him. Jess's formerly pristine white Cloudmonsters, sitting on his desk, now filled with his hot, sticky load, turned him on even more. "Now, Jess, you'll wear these sneakers every day to class, without any socks. And after each class, you'll make sure to wear them and stay behind so I can fuck them again and again to keep this load fresh. Understood?" Mr. Smith asked, his voice firm yet laced with desire.
Mr. Smith sat back in his chair, out of breath but looking content with his work. He couldn't believe how turned on he was by this whole scenario. Jess couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction as well. She picked up her sneaker and brought it to her nose, taking a whiff of the strong combination of sweat and cum. She could feel her own arousal building up as she tipped her shoe back, watching as the cum flowed side to side. She couldn't resist sharing the cum between her sneakers, pouring some more into the left one as well to even it out.
"Now, put them on," Mr. Smith commanded, his voice full of anticipation. Jess slipped her sneakers back on, feeling the warm cum squish between her toes and up the insides of her sneakers, making her gasp. She couldn't believe how satisfying and arousing the feeling was. "Wow, it feels so nice and warm," Jess said, surprised at her own arousal. "You better get going now, Jess. Don't want you to be late to your next class," Mr. Smith said, looking at his watch.
Jess looked at the time and realized he was right, she had her management class in 5 minutes! She quickly gathered her things and rushed off to her next class, the squishing sound of her cum-filled ON Cloudmonsters making it hard to focus. As she walked, Jess couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement and anticipation for what was to come. She couldn't wait to wear her sneakers with Mr. Smith's cum inside them and fulfill his sneaker fetish, all while getting a good grade in his class, basically for free in Jess’ opinion. And who knows, maybe Mr. Smith has awoken a fetish of her own she didn’t even know she had.
Enjoy!
Chapter 1 - In Her Shoes
Jess was 21 years old and a junior in college. She sat at her dorm room desk, staring at her computer with a look of frustration on her face. She was short, standing at only 5'2", but she made up for it with her bold personality. Her brown hair was tied back in a messy bun, and she wore a crop top and a pair of short Nike running shorts, showing off her toned figure.
Procrastination and her love for late-night parties had caused Jess to neglect her studies, resulting in a failing grade in her statistics class. And her professor, Mr. Jeff Smith, wasn't making it any easier. He was a hunk, with sharp features and a muscular build. Jess couldn't help but glance at him every chance she got, which probably didn't help her situation in class. But she couldn't deny the way he looked at her too, with a hint of desire in his eyes. As Jess checked her grades, she noticed that her grade in stats had dropped drastically. Desperate to fix it, she shut her laptop and grabbed her bag. She stopped at the door to slip on her all-white ON cloudmonsters, her favorite pair of shoes. She loved how comfortable they were, and since she always tried to keep them in good shape, these ones were pristine. The material was just as white as it always was, only the insides were darkened from her feet sweating in them all day. Not caring about her lazy outfit, Jess made sure to show off enough cleavage to improve her odds and left out the door.
She took a deep breath and knocked on Mr. Smith's office door. As soon as he opened the door, Jess felt her heart race. He stood there in his fitted button-up shirt and slacks, looking as handsome as ever. His dark hair was styled perfectly, and his glasses rested on the bridge of his nose. Jess couldn't deny her attraction to him, even though she knew it was inappropriate. "Mr. Smith, can I talk to you about my grade in your class?" she asked, trying to sound confident. "Of course, come in," he replied, stepping aside for her to enter. Jess took a seat in front of his desk, crossing her legs and adjusting her top to show off even more of her cleavage.
She could see Mr. Smith's eyes dart from her breasts down to her sneakers, but he quickly got straight to business, and explained to Jess that there was no extra credit to be offered, and it’d be unfair to give her special treatment. “Please Mr. Smith, I’ll do anything” Jess says, almost pleading. “Well Jess, there’s only one thing I can think of that would make up all your missing work.”
“Please just tell me what it is and I’ll do it!”
Mr. Smith's smirk turned into a full-fledged smile, his eyes lit up with deviance, but also excitement. He leaned back in his chair, his gaze dropping to Jess's feet. "Good. Now I want you to do as I say, raise your feet up onto my desk," he commanded, gesturing to the Cloudmonsters on her feet. Jess hesitated for a moment, feeling a bit nervous but also strangely aroused. She knew she shouldn't be agreeing to whatever this is, but she was desperate to pass this class. Slowly, she raised her feet up onto Mr. Smith's desk, crossing her ankles and leaning back in the chair. She could feel his eyes on her, taking in the sight of her warm and slightly sweaty ONs. "You see, Jess, I have a sneaker fetish. And your little Cloudmonsters are just perfect for it," Mr. Smith explained, his voice husky with desire. Jess couldn't believe what she was hearing. Her professor had a fetish for her sneakers? It was both shocking and strangely exciting. Mr. Smith leaned forward, his hand reaching out to caress the toe of her perfect little white ONs. Jess could feel herself getting more and more turned on by his touch. "Now, let me explain exactly what I want to do with your Sneakers," he said, his hand still caressing the toe of her sparkling clean shoes, even slipping a finger past the laces to feel inside her warm, sweaty ONs. Jess could feel her heart race with excitement as Mr. Smith painted a vivid picture of his desires. He wanted to smell her sneakers, inhaling the scent of her feet after a long day of walking around campus. He wanted to fuck her sneakers, thrusting his hard dick inside her warm, sweaty ONs. But most of all, he wanted to cum inside her sneakers, filling them with his load and making her wear them that way. Jess couldn't believe what she was hearing, but she couldn't deny that it was turning her on. She could feel herself getting wet at the thought of fulfilling his sneaker fetish and getting rewarded with a good grade. "And you'll do all of this for me, won't you Jess?" Mr. Smith asked, his voice low and full of desire. "Yes, I'll do it," Jess said, feeling a sense of adrenaline and excitement at the same time. Jess could see the bulge in his pants getting even bigger. She couldn't believe what she was about to do, but she couldn't back down now.
"Good, and it also will start NOW. From this moment on Jess, you must wear your Cloudmonsters to class every day, and without any socks, or else you will be punished. And after each class, you'll stay behind and watch me fuck them hard until I cum inside them and you’ll wear them that way, absolutely no cleaning them unless I say" Mr. Smith explained, his voice full of anticipation. Jess could feel herself getting wet at the thought of fulfilling his deep desire for her shoes, even as a sense of sadness crept over her as she realized her beautiful white sneakers will never be the same again.
"Do we have a deal?" Mr. Smith asked again, still caressing her ONs with his hand. Jess looked into his eyes, feeling a mixture of fear and arousal. She nodded, "We have a deal," Jess said, her voice shaky with nerves.
"Good girl," Mr. Smith said, his eyes filled with desire. "Now, if you don't mind…," he said with a wink, slipping her Cloudmonsters off her feet, one at a time. He could already smell the strong, sweaty scent of Jess's feet, mixed with the scent of her ONs. He couldn't help but take a deep breath in, taking in the strong aroma. "These sneakers of yours smell so perfect, Jess. I love it," Mr. Smith said, taking a moment to bury his face in them again. He then peeled her socks off her feet, revealing her pretty arches and toes. He placed them in his drawer, knowing she wouldn't need them anymore.
"Now, Jess, I'll be nice enough to give you a choice. You can either watch as I fuck and cum in your hot little sneakers, or you can wait in the hall till I’m done giving them everything they deserve and more," Mr. Smith said, giving her the option. Jess couldn't believe she had gotten to this point of no return already , but she was also too turned on to back down now. She told Mr. Smith that she would love to stay and watch. "Excellent. And I could use some encouragement from you, Jess. It's the least you could do for me," Mr. Smith said, unbuttoning his pants and revealing his large, aroused cock. He placed Jess's right sneaker on the edge of the desk and slowly slid his member into it, keeping eye contact with Jess the entire time. Her little size six sneaker was barely big enough to fit his entire shaft, but Mr. Smith made it work. He brought the other sneaker up to his nose, taking in the intoxicating scent, and began thrusting his rod into her perfectly white Cloudmonster. Jess obliged his request and began talking to him, telling him how much she loved seeing him punish her poor, little sneakers. She took her left shoe out of his hand and held it up for him to smell, allowing him to focus all of his attention on fucking her right sneaker even harder. "Yes, professor, smell my little white sneakers! I've worn them to work as a waitress, to school, even to the gym! But I’ve kept them perfectly clean just for you to fuck. Oh, I can't wait to wear your cum around in them, FILL THEM, FILL THEM WITH ALL YOUR CUM" Jess said, her voice filled with desire, even surprising herself. Her words pushed Mr. Smith over the edge, and he began moaning and thrusting harder and deeper into her sneaker. Jess watched in amazement as he pulled out mid-orgasm, shooting his warm cum inside her sneaker. The ropes slapping her insoles, pooling into the worn down pad of her insole and quickly flowing to the toes. He quickly switched to the other sneaker, filling up the heel with the last few spurts of his cum. "Oh my gosh!" Jess exclaimed, shocked at how much cum he was able to fill up in her pretty white ONs. She couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction and arousal at the thought of wearing them with her professor’s cum in them.
Mr. Smith sat back in his chair, catching his breath and admiring the sight in front of him. Jess's formerly pristine white Cloudmonsters, sitting on his desk, now filled with his hot, sticky load, turned him on even more. "Now, Jess, you'll wear these sneakers every day to class, without any socks. And after each class, you'll make sure to wear them and stay behind so I can fuck them again and again to keep this load fresh. Understood?" Mr. Smith asked, his voice firm yet laced with desire.
Mr. Smith sat back in his chair, out of breath but looking content with his work. He couldn't believe how turned on he was by this whole scenario. Jess couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction as well. She picked up her sneaker and brought it to her nose, taking a whiff of the strong combination of sweat and cum. She could feel her own arousal building up as she tipped her shoe back, watching as the cum flowed side to side. She couldn't resist sharing the cum between her sneakers, pouring some more into the left one as well to even it out.
"Now, put them on," Mr. Smith commanded, his voice full of anticipation. Jess slipped her sneakers back on, feeling the warm cum squish between her toes and up the insides of her sneakers, making her gasp. She couldn't believe how satisfying and arousing the feeling was. "Wow, it feels so nice and warm," Jess said, surprised at her own arousal. "You better get going now, Jess. Don't want you to be late to your next class," Mr. Smith said, looking at his watch.
Jess looked at the time and realized he was right, she had her management class in 5 minutes! She quickly gathered her things and rushed off to her next class, the squishing sound of her cum-filled ON Cloudmonsters making it hard to focus. As she walked, Jess couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement and anticipation for what was to come. She couldn't wait to wear her sneakers with Mr. Smith's cum inside them and fulfill his sneaker fetish, all while getting a good grade in his class, basically for free in Jess’ opinion. And who knows, maybe Mr. Smith has awoken a fetish of her own she didn’t even know she had.